Narrative Text: The Hole

“Well, this hole quite interesting right?” said Maggie to August.

“Yeah, I know. But can we just go back to the camp?” August answer.

“Yeah, but.. I don’t know I just want to be here little longer. Curious what’s in the hole..”

“But Maggs, maybe Mrs. Valen hurry about us now because we didn’t come to the camp about five minutes ago?”

“Fine fine!” said Maggie.

            And then August and Maggie walked away from the hole, but suddenly Maggie heard something from their back and saw a shinny light blue from the hole. After debated a while with August, Maggie won and they came back again to

that hole.

“Well, Im curious about what… wait what’s that? Is that a rock?” said Maggie

           

            Well August just shake his head,

“Well I don’t know, can we just go back pleaseee?” asked August.

            Before they went back to the camp, Maggie took the rock. She was saved it, but August didn’t agree. He thought she better left the rock in the hole where it was supposed to be. And Maggie just pretended that she was leave it but the truth she kept the rock with her.

            After they arrived at the camp they prepared to back to their own home. After 2 weeks participated summer camp at Arizona, they just wanted to go home. Actually, they were home-sick. Need 3 hours, from Arizona to their home. Then after the long tripped, they arrived to their own home.

            August went to his home and when he arrived he felt so sleepy, and he decided to sleep.  While he slept, he dreamed about Maggie and the hole. It was like the hole pulled her in the hole. Like the hole has a energy that can pulled her inside.  August woke up.

            He run into her house and found that her family still there. He asked them about Maggie but then they said they didn’t have a daughter name Maggie and they didn’t know him. They –Maggie’s family- wondered why a strange boy knew them. They didn’t remember anything about Maggie. Maggie was gone, said August in his heart.